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These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.

Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.

Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.

To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.

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These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.

Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.

Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.

To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.

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These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.

Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.

Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.

To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.

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These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.

Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.

Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.

To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.

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These days, science and technology has been evolving at a higher rate. This has resulted in higher rate of life expectancy ratio to be boomed up in last few years. This advancement has certainly increased the ratio of population from earlier times. Herein, i firmly believe that this development has more of advantages then just demerits.

Firstly, the rapid change in science and technology has provided us with the privilege where people can live longer than in past. As a result this has made the older generation to stay motivated till they can contribute to one’s country. Nowadays, people at the age of 70 also have some contribution in the overall all enhancement of the economy. For instance professions like writer, lawmakers, scientist, and many more have a lot to put forth the country's contribution. This not just allows the country to improve but also helps older generation to stay intact with all the social awareness around.

Furthermore, in this modern world grandparents are the only concerned ones for the offspring’s as are the only valid provider for upbringing except parents. They have a greater role to play this way as they will share their own experiences with them to make children vulnerable to the environment around. For an instance, if older people are the best people who can nourish their grandchildren.

To conclude, the improved medical care and facilities has made it possible to have longer expectancy life it is just a myth that they are a burden to the society. I believe that this way they are equal contributors in the enhancement and development of country working towards making a nation standing successful in all spheres.

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? v. 5

Nowadays, the world is more and more developed, hence the medical care is also improved so people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. I believe that it brings more advantages than disadvantages. Firstly, the conditions of living are improving, especially medical care, people go to the hospital to check their health regularly, they can detect and cure dangerous disease sooner. Therefore, people's lifetime is longer. For example, if someone finds out they have early-stage cancer, they will be treated early and sustain life. The focus on food choices also increased, people will know which foods are clean, what foods are healthy. In addition, the increase in life expectancy will help many professionals, teachers, researcher or doctors to devote more to the country. Secondly, one thing to worry about that life expectancy is increasing means the retiring age will later. Young people after graduated can not find a job because elder people are in this position with more experience. So that the government needs to spend much money to support young people and create more jobs to keep an unemployment rate not increase. But thanks to that, there will be many generations in a family living together. Descendants will live with grandparents, they will learn about many things related to history and tradition. In conclusion, the advantages of increased life expectancy outweigh the disadvantages, Life is precious and the government should spend more money on medical care in any way possible. All of us want to live longer and contribute to our family and country for as long as possible.

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